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Two Left Feet

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Eloise
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0 posted 12-05-1999 08:46 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Eloise

Oh no, here I go again!
As I trip on my own feet.
Please bend down and pick me up
And help me to my seat.

This new dance that you do out here
Leaves me tangled and confused.
I feel like a floppy ragdoll.
And I'm sure you're all amused.

Standing in the line for shiny dancing shoes,
When they were handed out, two left ones I received.
Now as my dancing partner sees the clumsy way I dance.
When the music's finally over, I'm sure he is relieved.

So just plop me at a table
And put a drink in hand.
The dance floor is a safer place
If I just sit and toast the band.
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Severn
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1 posted 12-05-1999 08:55 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I agree, I agree, I agree - utterly!
- very cute.
Nan
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2 posted 12-05-1999 09:11 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

You just need the right dancin' shoes - is all....
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3 posted 12-05-1999 09:20 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

...hehehehe...did you see me at my daughter's wedding, Friday night?! Oh well, at least I tried!  Great poem!  

 Denise


Eloise
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4 posted 12-05-1999 11:02 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Perhaps Denise was given two right ones since I have the two left ones!

Congrats on your daughters wedding Denise
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5 posted 12-05-1999 11:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thanks Eloise! Yes, perhaps I have the two right feet! hehehehehe  

 Denise


 
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