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Denise
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0 posted 1999-12-05 08:14 PM


He wonders often what it is
That makes her want to stay
What does she see that others can't
For others turned away.

No, it can't be wealth or status
He's but a simple man
And the dreams of youth have vanished
Yes ev'ry single plan.

He never thought that looks were his
She tends to disagree
And he could be more romantic
But sure, he tries to be.

And his hair once fine and golden
Is turning thin and gray
And the strength of youth is waning
And more each passing day.

Then he asks her one day plainly,
"Just why do you still care?"
She just looks at him and smiles,
"I've found a treasure rare!"

A gentle soul won't fade away
It's as the purest gold
For it won't decay or tarnish
And never shall grow old.



 Denise


© Copyright 1999 Denise - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 1999-12-05 08:24 PM


Great, Denise - How true it is - We need only have the wisdom to recognize that inner beauty.....
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2 posted 1999-12-05 08:25 PM


Beauty is carried within.  What a lovely poem.
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3 posted 1999-12-05 08:28 PM


Denise, this is one of my favorites from you! I bet it's sent as an "ECard" a lot! And rightfully so, it's lovely!  

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4 posted 1999-12-05 08:30 PM


Few people have good enough eyesight to see it, Denise. Excellent, as always.
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5 posted 1999-12-05 08:30 PM


Denise - What lovely sentiment you've expressed. So true for so many.
How wonderfully in love with love they are.
I've often thought those very thoughts when I've seen the older couples on the street holding hands and being so obviously ... still in love.

I visit many nursing homes to share poetry with them and I can tell you that ~forever love~ does exist.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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6 posted 1999-12-05 09:25 PM


Thank you, Nan, Eloise, Pdv, Balladeer and Marge for reading and commenting! You are all so sweet!

 Denise



Dawne
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7 posted 1999-12-05 11:29 PM


Denise, what can I say,
I love it!

Denise
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8 posted 1999-12-05 11:33 PM


Thank you, Dawne! I'm go glad for your reading and commenting!

 Denise



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9 posted 1999-12-05 11:36 PM


Beautiful, just beautiful Denise....


 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



Denise
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10 posted 1999-12-05 11:40 PM


Thank you so much, Pepper! You are so sweet!
Goodnight!


 Denise



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11 posted 1999-12-06 06:14 AM


Denise - how inspirational.
Well done!  K

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12 posted 1999-12-06 10:43 AM


Denise the beauty just pours forth from this. Excellent, excellent!!!  
Clapping...


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13 posted 1999-12-06 01:04 PM


Denise...this is absolutely wonderful  
Denise
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14 posted 1999-12-06 09:16 PM


Thank you, Kamla, Rebecca and Ruth for your reading and kind comments! You all are so wonderful!  

 Denise



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15 posted 2004-09-20 12:36 PM


I love rare treasures myself, and I've found a few. This is so sweet and beautiful.

~sky

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Do your best, just keep on laughing
It's all on you, there's always a brand new day. -Avril Lavigne

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