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Do You Wish For Me

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Eloise
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0 posted 12-05-1999 07:42 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Eloise

The time we had together slipped away so fast.
Somehow I knew, it would never last.
But how can I explain this feeling that I get.
I don't think my heart has gotten over you yet.

When I hear your name, I pretend I don't care.
But deep down inside, it's more than I can bear.
When you wish upon a star, do you wish for me?
Will we go back, or was it just not meant to be?

I dream of you, but you're not there.
There's broken pieces everywhere.
You're in my thoughts both day and night.
Unable to touch you, but you're still within sight.

As I gaze into the dark night sky,
A thousand times over I ask myself why.
With a little work, I'll be a diamond someday.
Then you will wish today was still yesterday.

© Copyright 1999 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
Rachel_A
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1 posted 12-05-1999 07:46 PM       View Profile for Rachel_A   Email Rachel_A   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rachel_A

this is sad, and i can relate...but the pain does fade...i don't know yet if it ever truly goes away, but one thing i do know is that life goes on!  great poem.  
Kitty**
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2 posted 12-05-1999 07:57 PM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**

So Sad...I know how you must feel..
Time will take care of all...
Give it time..
Denise
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3 posted 12-05-1999 08:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sad yet beautiful! Another lovely poem, Eloise!

 Denise



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4 posted 12-05-1999 08:06 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Eloise -
I wish for you
another night,
of love in bloom
and stars so bright.

In time it will
come to be ...
the fondest of
your memories.

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com
Eloise
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5 posted 12-05-1999 08:16 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Rachel, Kitty thanks for the comments.

Denise thanks for all the comments on all that I write.

Marge

I wish that I could quip
As quickly as you do.
But I stumble and I stutter
The words just don't flow through.

But know that I am grateful
For all the things you've said.
You always have such kind words
To follow what you've read.
 
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