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A life without purpose

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Kevin
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0 posted 12-05-1999 05:08 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

A life without purpose,
I lived day to day.
Then you came along,
Words I could not convey.
At that very moment
My life was complete.
My mind, it was racing,
My heart could not beat.
Nothing else mattered.
You were the one,
Crawling through life,
To you I did run.
But you saw it different
Already content
Nothing could happen,
nothing I meant.
And so life goes on.
I live day to day.
My life incomplete,
My love gone astray.


 The two most waisted things in life are time and potential, I have both and not a clue what to do with them.
© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 12-05-1999 05:58 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Touching poem, Kevin. Sometimes love hurts. You have expressed that so beautifully!

 Denise

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2 posted 12-05-1999 08:03 PM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**

Time and potential..alas, it's something a
lot of us wish for more of..
Your day will come...hang in there!
MADDavid
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3 posted 12-05-1999 08:11 PM       View Profile for MADDavid   Email MADDavid   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MADDavid

There is a forum that may have your answer, if you dare to read in the Spiritual Forum.  I challenge you to go there.  There you will find a lot of caring people that can show you where to get the answers to your questions and since you have a lot of time on your hands, go for it.  I say this out of love and honestly believe what I am telling you.

 Shine a light and darkness disappears.
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 12-05-1999 08:13 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kevin -
What a cutie pie you are.
I couldn't help but see.
You are just a doll ...
wish I was as young as thee.

Thanks for the picture
to put with your rhyme.
You'll have no trouble keeping
the girl next time.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com
RainbowGirl
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5 posted 12-05-1999 09:30 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Kevin:  Next time you feel the blues write a funny poem and know how many people you'll make laugh and in turn, you'll laugh too...well, I hope you will..

HUGS

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...

Kevin
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6 posted 12-05-1999 10:19 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

Thank you all,

I have thought about writing to cheer me up but ive decided, these feelings are too strong to let go unrecorded, someday ill look back on them and smile
i hope
Dawne
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7 posted 12-05-1999 11:35 PM       View Profile for Dawne   Email Dawne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawne

Well Kevin,
I agree these feelings should
be let out, makes for some
great poems, I loved it!
 
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