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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-12-05 12:14 PM


Common

They say she has a common way,
With a very common say.
And that she talks a common talk,
With a very common walk.
Her manners are of common lace,
And they say of common grace.
She has a very common smile
And her eyes a common style.
Her laughter sounds a common round,
Just an average common sound.
But when she lays her hand in mine,
All that's common turns divine.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 1999-12-05 12:18 PM


Another sweet tribute to your wife.
This one isn't too long, either
In fact, it's perfect!
Liz

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2 posted 1999-12-05 12:39 PM


Seymour -
It is a very common note,
it says I like the poem you wrote.
What is not so common, pal,
is the fact I find you phenomenonal.




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Sunshine
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3 posted 1999-12-05 08:00 AM


I'd read it before, so I was pleased to come back and read it again! You're wife is so very fortunate...
Denise
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4 posted 1999-12-05 04:09 PM


There is nothing common about the love you two share! This is beautiful, Seymour!  

 Denise


Ohme
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5 posted 1999-12-05 04:12 PM


Precious. And I think that is just the way it is suppose to be! Lovely
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