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The Feeling

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FALLEN ANGEL
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since 12-01-1999
Posts 19
BROWNSVILLE, TX, USA


0 posted 12-04-1999 02:19 AM       View Profile for FALLEN ANGEL   Email FALLEN ANGEL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FALLEN ANGEL

THE FEELING

IT'S LIKE BEING ON THE EDGE ALL THE TIME.
STANDING ON THE EDGE OF A CLIFF,
ALMOST FALLING,
TRYING TO KEEP YOUR BALANCE,
YOU KNOW,
THAT TINGLE INSIDE.
IT'S ALWAYS THERE,
NEVER RESTING,
ALWAYS HAUNTING,
STALKING,
AND TERRORIZING ME.
IT STIRS MY EMOTIONS INSIDE;
FURIOUS,
HUMBLE,
FRIGHTENED.
BOIL, BOIL, TOIL AND TROUBLE,
THROUGH OUT THIS WORLD I, AM TO STUMBLE.
THIS FEELING I WISH I COULD CONQUER.
RIP OPEN MY CHEST,
GRAB THIS, THIS, FEELING,
STRANGLE IT AND LOCK IT IN A BOX.
BURY IT,
NEVER TO BE RELEASED AGAIN.
FORSAKE IT FOREVER,
NEVER TO REAR IT'S UGLY HEAD AGAIN.
LEAVE ME, LET ME BE!
BUT THIS FEELING I KNOW,
I WILL NOT SHAKE,
BECAUSE I STILL LOVE YOU,
AND THAT IS NO MISTAKE.

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Athas
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since 12-04-1999
Posts 23
Edinburgh, Scotland


1 posted 12-04-1999 07:32 AM       View Profile for Athas   Email Athas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Athas

I think I can relate to some of this. I always thought that falling in love was meant to be a wondeful thing but maby it is just as scary in a way as It can be. I like the poem by the way.
Severn
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2 posted 12-08-1999 06:46 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Welcome to passions.
Good poem - you described your emotions well.  
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