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Master
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0 posted 12-03-1999 10:50 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

* So this would sound better when you read it, read until the period not the end of the line.

Dear heart, I’m told, you have no eyes.
I order you to see no fear nor pine
About being blind.
Yet, you can see-- truth lies in time;
And only time will prove, “truth lies!”
And words do bind
Us with the illusions that we chase.
All fair is foul—all foul is fair,
And greater still is that
Which can be neither. And yet, disgrace
Does have a pretty face. I’m aware
Of it, yet not so glad
To see it. How quickly blood is spilled-
It dries much slower than an ocean,
While being far more brute...
“God save the king!” Macbeth is ill
With fear, and stripped of his emotion
He stands before You nude.
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-03-1999 10:54 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

You, Sir, are on a roll! Great work!

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It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

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2 posted 12-03-1999 11:02 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I thank you, Ma'am, for replying!
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3 posted 12-04-1999 12:13 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Pretty good! I do enjoy Shakespeare, and your work also Master!
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4 posted 12-04-1999 10:51 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Ofcourse, you like me more, right? *S*
 
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