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One Heart, One Mind

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Poetess099
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0 posted 12-03-1999 07:35 PM       View Profile for Poetess099   Email Poetess099   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poetess099

His heart is one of the best things about him.
The way he is able to love unconditionally.
The way that he touches me with his words,
and his most humble thoughts.
He is such a beautiful person.
Sometimes around him,
words fail me.
His mind amazes me.
I could honestly spend all day
just watching him think.
He captivates me
with his inducive mind.
He seduces me
with his whim and
almost sagacious psyche.
He is truly the most fascinating
individual I've ever had
the liberty of knowing.
His mere presence absolutely draws me in.
I want to know everything about him.
I want him to know everything about me.
I just want him.



------------------
Melissa

~~I can resist anything but temptation~~ Oscar Wilde
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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 12-03-1999 07:38 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I know what you mean and you say it beautifully!
Liz
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2 posted 12-05-1999 07:36 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Melissa. Welcome to Passions!

 Denise

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3 posted 12-05-1999 07:41 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Beautiful, Melissa!  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


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4 posted 12-05-1999 08:20 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Poetess099 -
Nicely put.
Honesty in every line.
I like it.


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Severn
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5 posted 12-08-1999 06:34 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Welcome Poetess, nice to have you here.

This is great - I like Marge's comment about honesty - it suits this poem well.
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