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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 12-03-1999 06:40 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dr.Moose1

To give is divine
To recieve is not mine
To those who didn't care
Too late , you're not there

'till thoughts re-arranged
'till conciousness strained
'till what that remains
'tis all in one vein

Once ,there was one
Once , things were done
Once , it was fun
Once , we were young

Twice, now retold
Twice , now and old
Twice, then again
Thrice,missed you my friend


© Copyright 1999 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 12-08-1999 06:52 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Interesting...shouldn't have been missed like your friend!

I'm not too sure what you mean Moose - care to tell?

(Some people say a good poet is a confusing one...LOL  )
Pepper
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Yes, very interesting Dr. Moose...

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


hoot_owl_rn
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I love the presentation of this...great format!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 12-08-1999 11:56 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dr.Moose1,
Cute and not a bit mute.
Enjoyed.
Andrew Scott
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5 posted 12-08-1999 03:45 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Hmmm… If anyone would be missed it would be you our dear Moose.  I think I got the meaning down after a couple of reads, but who's to say but you. My read on it… lost love of a time gone by.  Hey… if you see Ian tell him I've got a spot that needs some attention. C-ya in the 'Stute.
Betty Gravitt
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6 posted 12-08-1999 08:08 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Hmmm... well I like the words, but I'll just wait until I figure out what you are trying for before I go any farther.  
Nan
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It's best not to question the Doc... He gets Cratchety.... Just enjoy.....   
Dr.Moose1
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8 posted 12-09-1999 04:56 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Well ,
This started out as a self indulgent " who needs you" kind of piece . From there it progressed to a middle of the road " yeah we had a few good times" , and then finally ended up being a sentimental ( but honest )
" I will never forget you " . Kinda ran the gamut of emotions . As to what I was trying to say ? I haven't the faintest idea !And no I do not get Cratchity!And anyone who says so will have to answer to me !
 
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