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Eloise
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0 posted 12-03-1999 05:39 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Eloise

I have a little heartache
That goes wherever I go.
It's hidden deep within
I want no one to know.

I have a little teardrop
I blink it back inside.
I hold my head up high
And swallow it with pride.

I have a secret fantasy
Etched in the shadows of my mind.
I walk back through that path alone
To the dreams so hard to find.

I have a compelling wish
To bring closure to this door.
To collect my many tears
And think of you no more.


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Ohme
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1 posted 12-03-1999 05:53 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

And in time it will happen. Hang on. nicely done;
Severn
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2 posted 12-08-1999 06:53 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Oooohhh...  
hard to do sometimes...
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3 posted 12-08-1999 07:35 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Eloise -
This is so well stated.
May your heart find what you seek.
Lovely, my dear.


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hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 12-09-1999 06:23 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This says a great deal. I hope you can close those doors too and go on
Denise
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5 posted 12-09-1999 09:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very touching poem, Eloise, and well done!


 Denise


Betty Gravitt
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6 posted 12-09-1999 09:58 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Eloise, seems you and I need to close a few doors. Hang in there girl, we will survive and in time we will   again.
I know how you feel.


 B Gravitt


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