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Beki
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0 posted 12-03-1999 04:55 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Beki

1)

crystal clarity
in the chilling breath of night -
prey stalking prey.

2)

this pilgrim travels
with no map, is not intent
upon arriving.
© Copyright 1999 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 12-03-1999 08:39 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Nice to see you post again, Beki - These Passionate folks may not be aware that you're an expert on Haiku - So, do pay attention, my friends...
Beki
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2 posted 12-04-1999 05:36 AM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Nan,
Thanks for the vote of confidence and nice plug {{grin}}
hoot_owl_rn
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Excellent Beki...your talents shine through
Ohme
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I'm green with envy Beki. I took a class in Haiku and flunked!! Like these
JOY 14
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5 posted 12-04-1999 01:14 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

Especialy liked number 1, Beki! You write haiku very well.

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JOY

Beki
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6 posted 12-04-1999 03:15 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

OhME and Joy, I appreciate your comments. Nan is right, haiku is my particular specialty. I will email you both a link to my site where you can read more.....thanks again And Hoot, it is nice to have you read my work again Thanks.

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7 posted 07-13-2000 11:38 PM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

you certainly write these haiku very well...will look out for more of your haiku

may i be linked to your site too?will like to learn to write these gems well
 
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