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two new haiku |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
1) crystal clarity in the chilling breath of night - prey stalking prey. 2) this pilgrim travels with no map, is not intent upon arriving. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice to see you post again, Beki - These Passionate folks may not be aware that you're an expert on Haiku - So, do pay attention, my friends...  |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Nan, Thanks for the vote of confidence and nice plug {{grin}} |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent Beki...your talents shine through |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I'm green with envy Beki. I took a class in Haiku and flunked!!  Like these |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Especialy liked number 1, Beki! You write haiku very well. ------------------ JOY |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
OhME and Joy, I appreciate your comments. Nan is right, haiku is my particular specialty. I will email you both a link to my site where you can read more.....thanks again And Hoot, it is nice to have you read my work again Thanks.[This message has been edited by Beki (edited 12-04-1999).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you certainly write these haiku very well...will look out for more of your haiku  may i be linked to your site too?will like to learn to write these gems well |
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