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lostboy
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since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

0 posted 1999-12-03 01:00 PM


When I first saw you
I couldn't stop myself from reaching out
My love was hard to hide

Together, we are one
Our world is a place where dreams come true
And hearts are not broken

You look into my eyes
You see through me and touch my soul
Like a warm, unexpected wind

The one who crossed our paths
Now guides us down a road
Where loves grows like spring flowers

With your slighest touch
You light a candle inside me
An eternal flame to withstand any storm

I behold your vision
With passing years, lines will deepen
And you're more beautiful than ever

We melt when we hold close
As a fallen snowflake in the desert
Beneath a sky unmatched by your blue eyes

You are my peace, my purpose, my life
You bring to me with each new day
Love, strength, happiness and hope for tomorrow.

© Copyright 1999 lostboy - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
1 posted 1999-12-03 01:04 PM


Very Beautiful
Liz

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 1999-12-03 01:45 PM


My soul has been touched by the beauty of your words,
So long have I awaited,
For such beauty to be heard,
For each word, a drop of water
to my hungering thirst,
I feel my heart about to burst!
For it was dead,
Now alive,
I have been awakend in my slumbers sleep,
I have been revived,
With these words I shall keep!

lostboy
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since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 1999-12-03 02:53 PM


Liz, thanks for your words, much appreciated!

ARH, you "are" a romantic heart and have touched me by your response..I'm glad I was able to revive you, you are more than welcome to these words!!

Dolphins3
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since 1999-09-30
Posts 135
Wisconsin
4 posted 1999-12-03 03:01 PM


Lostboy,
Your poem was very beautiful and touched me very deeply. Keep up the great work!

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since 1999-11-06
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
5 posted 1999-12-04 10:55 AM


LostBoy - I liked very much the imagery here.

When someone lights our candle,
we fairly glow from the light.
May your candle stay lit,
though it may flicker in the wind,
for when it flickers
it's merely dancing.




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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
6 posted 1999-12-04 04:27 PM


Ahhh....(fanning self) "We melt.....as a fallen snowflake in the desert..."
An absloutely astounding idea!! This whole thing was fabulously written with emotional beauty and love! You are truly a romantic ........what a touch!!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale


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