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A Vision

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lostboy
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0 posted 12-03-1999 01:00 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lostboy

When I first saw you
I couldn't stop myself from reaching out
My love was hard to hide

Together, we are one
Our world is a place where dreams come true
And hearts are not broken

You look into my eyes
You see through me and touch my soul
Like a warm, unexpected wind

The one who crossed our paths
Now guides us down a road
Where loves grows like spring flowers

With your slighest touch
You light a candle inside me
An eternal flame to withstand any storm

I behold your vision
With passing years, lines will deepen
And you're more beautiful than ever

We melt when we hold close
As a fallen snowflake in the desert
Beneath a sky unmatched by your blue eyes

You are my peace, my purpose, my life
You bring to me with each new day
Love, strength, happiness and hope for tomorrow.
© Copyright 1999 lostboy - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 12-03-1999 01:04 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Very Beautiful
Liz
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2 posted 12-03-1999 01:45 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

My soul has been touched by the beauty of your words,
So long have I awaited,
For such beauty to be heard,
For each word, a drop of water
to my hungering thirst,
I feel my heart about to burst!
For it was dead,
Now alive,
I have been awakend in my slumbers sleep,
I have been revived,
With these words I shall keep!
lostboy
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3 posted 12-03-1999 02:53 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Liz, thanks for your words, much appreciated!

ARH, you "are" a romantic heart and have touched me by your response..I'm glad I was able to revive you, you are more than welcome to these words!!
Dolphins3
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4 posted 12-03-1999 03:01 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Lostboy,
Your poem was very beautiful and touched me very deeply. Keep up the great work!
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5 posted 12-04-1999 10:55 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LostBoy - I liked very much the imagery here.

When someone lights our candle,
we fairly glow from the light.
May your candle stay lit,
though it may flicker in the wind,
for when it flickers
it's merely dancing.




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poetFemmeFatale
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6 posted 12-04-1999 04:27 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Ahhh....(fanning self) "We melt.....as a fallen snowflake in the desert..."
An absloutely astounding idea!! This whole thing was fabulously written with emotional beauty and love! You are truly a romantic ........what a touch!!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

 
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