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vandana
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0 posted 1999-12-03 11:38 AM


The time goes on,
So do life goes too,
If life did upon my view of point,
With several reason Ihave to livewith,
Knowing how life grows shorter,
Day by day,
The spirit's upon whose life depands on,
Life may fail when time dies on the dot of the day,
Life is short,
What's in this world ,
But sorrow,
Lord bring the time to correct our faults in our life,
And bring happiness to our heart,
To sit upon a hill,
The minutes I count,
How they run ,
How many make the hour full complete,
How many days will finish up the year,
My life can run thriugh mind,
And heart's ,
There's nothing in this world can make me joy,
Life's but a walking shadow,
Life is a dream are made on,
And our lillte life is round with a sleep,
If I do lose thee,
I do lose a thing,
I can lose my life too,

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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
1 posted 1999-12-03 11:51 AM


I liked this...made me a bit sad!! But, I often feel kinda like this!!

Bridgette

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."

Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
2 posted 1999-12-03 06:54 PM


I hope you are not feeling as sad as the poem.
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