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Sun Sets ... To Rise Again

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Marge Tindal
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Sun Sets ... To Rise Again
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

The azure sky
put to rest ...
with the palette
of colors
God uses
at sunset.

Sunsets glow
pulling the cover
of night around her.

Over the lake
she dips her rays
into the waters edge.

Shades of magenta
touch the horizon,
blending upward
into a palette
of crimson rose.

As she dips further
the colors
scheme
to become
the most
beautiful
array.

Almost
without warning
she's gone
except for
one last kiss
of midnight blue.

With the morning
she rises
from the lake again.
Proudly wearing
deep orange
peeking
from behind
soft, soft
shades of yellow
streaking.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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Lovin' it.... I can't read enough sunshiny poems....
hoot_owl_rn
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Oh, what beautiful imagery my friend. Well written
Elizabeth Santos
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Marge
Your poetry radiates, as always
This is beautiful
Liz
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I like this soo much. Incredible descriptions. This should hold me for the winter!
WhtDove
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Great imagery! I just love watching sunsets. You've described it very well. Sunrises too!

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Jesus is the reason for the season

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Like this Marge.... like it a lot, thanks.
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Marge You paint a beautiful picture with your words. *Smile*
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Marge: You paint the best of visions..

HUGS

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Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...
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It makes me want to pull up a chair and enjoy!!
Beki
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have often tried to capture a special sunset in words, you have done so beautifully :-)
Marge Tindal
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Nan - And lots of happy sunsets to greet you.
Hoot - It only came from watching the sun at the end of an otherwise so-so day.
Elizabeth, my friend - You make even a compliment radiate.
LostBoy - I hope that you get to share in the beauty of it through many winters.
WhiteDove - There is a different 'picture' painted every morning and evening.
UKHero - And my thanks to you for liking it.
Dolphins3 - God paints the sunsets and sunrises ... I can only let you know what I see. So glad you liked it.
RainbowGirl - Ah, what a vision it was.
OhMe - Come join me on the porch swing.
Beki - Enjoy my sunsets with me. I am so very glad that I was able to 'capture' it and share it with you.
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To each of you, my friends ... I'm so glad to have shared this lovely moment.
Thanks to all of you for visualizing it.


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