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DreamEvil
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0 posted 12-03-1999 03:19 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

You hold in your heart everything you need.
Nothing I offer could ever compare.
When we are apart my emotions bleed.
To be worthy of you much would I dare.
A part of me wants so badly to give.
Most of me remembers how I was burned.
I once hated this life I'm made to live.
Yet some value in me she has discerned.
Most of my soul is comprised of old scars.
There are facets to me no one else knows.
All my relationships bipolar mars.
Love rocks me with the wisdom it bestows.
Becoming superfluous is my fear.
If I lost myself I would shed no tear.


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because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

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Severn
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1 posted 12-03-1999 06:50 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Ah, the futility of being half a nation away! My friend, you need a hug. Wish she could give it to you. Excellent writing - and capturing of yourself. K
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2 posted 12-03-1999 09:31 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DE,
Your web is spread o'er the ego's nest,
I wonder at the nature of the quest.
Excellent writing.
Dark Angel
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3 posted 12-03-1999 06:22 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Soul-Brother this is wonderful. Terrific Writing !!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Alwye
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4 posted 12-03-1999 10:56 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wonderful Job Dream...I too wish she could give you that hug.

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*Krista Knutson*

"When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~

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5 posted 12-03-1999 11:01 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Excellence, as always, dear friend...(((hugs)))

Not the hug you want, but a temporary cuddle from a friend never hurts

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It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

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