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DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-12-03 03:19 AM

You hold in your heart everything you need.
Nothing I offer could ever compare.
When we are apart my emotions bleed.
To be worthy of you much would I dare.
A part of me wants so badly to give.
Most of me remembers how I was burned.
I once hated this life I'm made to live.
Yet some value in me she has discerned.
Most of my soul is comprised of old scars.
There are facets to me no one else knows.
All my relationships bipolar mars.
Love rocks me with the wisdom it bestows.
Becoming superfluous is my fear.
If I lost myself I would shed no tear.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-12-03 06:50 AM

Ah, the futility of being half a nation away! My friend, you need a hug. Wish she could give it to you. Excellent writing - and capturing of yourself. K

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 1999-12-03 09:31 AM

DE,
Your web is spread o'er the ego's nest,
I wonder at the nature of the quest.
Excellent writing.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 1999-12-03 06:22 PM

Soul-Brother this is wonderful. Terrific Writing !!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 1999-12-03 10:56 PM

Wonderful Job Dream...I too wish she could give you that hug.

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*Krista Knutson*

"When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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5 posted 1999-12-03 11:01 PM

Excellence, as always, dear friend...(((hugs)))

Not the hug you want, but a temporary cuddle from a friend never hurts

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It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

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