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Optical Illusions

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Rachel_A
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I feel so hot, I'm burning up
I feel so lonely and so cold.
I wipe the sweat from my brow
As I shiver from one of my many chills
I feel so lonely, so why am I always telling people, leave me alone?
The pen I am using to write
With is a black optical illusion
It comforts me greatly, watching it.
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Rachel_A -
I found some substance in this one.
The optical illusion of the pen moving of it's own accord ... recording the thoughts
in your mind ........ intriguing.
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