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I said I loved her

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 12-02-1999 11:24 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

This is just a little of my weird humor.

I said I loved her

When I was young and blind in love
I said I'd love her when her hair turned white.
But it never did.
I said I'd love her no matter times shift.
And she had a face lift.
And I said I loved her figure and derriere
Now it's much too ample there.
And I said we would love you forever.
Now it's seldom if ever.
Life is strange and stranger still
Since I have become a similar pill.
But in reality I love her still
For I see her through the eyes of youth
And the eyes of youth are my truth.
Amen and so help me.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Rachel_A
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1 posted 12-02-1999 11:36 PM       View Profile for Rachel_A   Email Rachel_A   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rachel_A

I really like this.
Balladeer
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2 posted 12-02-1999 11:40 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Your wierd humor sits well with me, Sy. I like it much.
Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 12-02-1999 11:52 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy
Life is strange , it wears no mask
Recognizing is the task
Love is strange, it often blinds
But then again, there are all kinds
Many ways , no bound it sees
And it comes in all degrees
You have surely both been blessed
For your love has passed time's test
Liz
Severn
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4 posted 12-03-1999 06:54 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Well - the weirdo revealed!!!!
LOL - this is great Sy. Well done indeed. K
Nan
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5 posted 12-03-1999 06:57 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

You're a pretty comPassionate dude, Sy..
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 12-03-1999 08:43 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Rachel,
I thank you and if you liked it, it says alot.
Balladeer,
Thanks for the sits well, I had my doubts.
Severn,
Thank you so much glad it was well taken I was a little worried. *L*
Nan,
Do you realy think so? *L*
Liz,
It's hard to keep up with your quick wit
I'm just happy no one took a fit. *L*
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 12-03-1999 09:35 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
I find it just a liitle weird
That weird you think yourself to be
I find not weirdness in your humor
Nor in anything that I see
Your humor does not make me soar
Your poetry takes me out to space
I'm empassioned with your every verse
But then, this is a passionate place
You have a way of putting words
And your words are thrush's song
My heart skips a hundred beats
With each verse I read along
That's why I am a passionate friend
And forever I will be
A passionate poet until the end
Passionate lover, passionate mother
Passionate lover of nature's wealth
Passionate in each daily task
And look passionately within myself
This poem does not make passions fly
But drizzles us with loving warmth
And love for you ever enhanced
Like sitting by your winter hearth
The man behind the poetry
Just as normal as they come
But the poetry from his pen
Will empassion me til kingdom come
Love ya,
Elizabeth
lostboy
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8 posted 12-03-1999 09:39 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Cool Sy! Very cool!
Sunshine
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9 posted 12-03-1999 09:50 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

This reminds me that when I see a photograph of myself, my husband must love me the way I see myself in my mind...so I bless him for that.

Good job, Sy, of putting truths forefront.
Ohme
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10 posted 12-03-1999 10:55 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

I like your weird humor cause it doesn't seem so weird.
Justbleu
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11 posted 12-03-1999 11:26 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I don't think it's all that weird Sy!!
I liked this!!

Bridgette

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 12-03-1999 06:29 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Liz,
To kingdom come, to kingdom come
How fast my poetry does run.
It seems to slide a greecy pole
And disappear into a hole.
I love your rhyme I love your verse
And into it I do immerse.
It makes no difference what the deed
As long as you have writ the read. *L*
Lost boy,
Like your cool since I live in Florida.
Sunshine,
I'm sure he loves you and will always for beayty is in the eyes of the beholder and to him you are beautiful, as you are to me.
Ohme,
Funny is a funny fly
You never know anothers high.
Justblew,
Weird can be funny to some
and you are one of that some.
Thank you.
 
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