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My Turn Around

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Beri
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0 posted 12-02-1999 10:22 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Beri

I gave you my heart
I gave you my soul
In my life, you've played an important part
You've played such a special role
You wrung my heart out
You took all I could give
Everything, you made me doubt
But I will continue to live
I'm taking my heart back from you
I'm pulling my heart away from your allure
I'm making it through
Because I really don't need you anymore!
© Copyright 1999 Beri - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 12-03-1999 12:08 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

That's the spirit!! I'm behind ya cheering you on!! I'm glad you're headed in the right direction again! I bet it feels good to write something like this that makes a statement! Great read!!
Rachel_A
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since 11-30-1999
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2 posted 12-03-1999 01:29 AM       View Profile for Rachel_A   Email Rachel_A   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rachel_A

now, this is great! i love poems that tell how i feel....i need to email this one to my ex!!!
Beri
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3 posted 12-03-1999 09:09 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Go right ahead!!! I did that actually myself, I'd say it helps! LOL.
Severn
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4 posted 12-04-1999 10:09 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Strong words indeed. Well done.
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