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It is odd to me
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It is odd to me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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It is odd to me Seeds of change within persist As winds of nature dance atwist. Play in space and dance in grace, Ever, through all times embrace. Without arms it does the deed, Stops and drops the carried seed. Within a paradox of blend, Where sinks the roots until its end. The wind, the artist without a thought, Paints the canvas green with thwart. Beyond imaginations ken, Where lies the primal Eden den. The garden of the apple seed The garden of our Adams deed The garden where the wind has blown, The garden that the wind has sown. And here is where we seek confession, Amongst the winds indiscretion? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Hummm,I don't know quite where to start This poem requires a little discussion A give and take which we can't make Since dialogue is out of the question So maybe it's a better call Not to even start at all I'll simply say, and make your day That this is a wonderful verse all the way It is so true, it is so you Verbal whiz of every hue So eloquent, so lyric bent You have been my heart's content Liz |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I absolutely love picturing the wind as an artist.....Neato!!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
WOW...you simply amaze me |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
....and the hits keep right on rolling, Sy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Liz, Just got up and don't feel clever, But your in my heart forever. Nan, The wind up there does alot of painting. Hoot, You are my WOW girl. *L* Balladeer, Glad you liked it I was not sure. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nature in its purest form....bless you. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I seem to have missed this! How shocking...  This is...unusual - in a really great way. The wind can only be indiscreet if there are voices to float upon it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Bless you and thank you. *L* Severn, There are always voices on the wind. *L* |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sey, now wait a minute here! You know I just thought this was well, absolutely wonderful! <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
How did I miss this one? Wonderful, as usual, Seymour! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I'm glad we can find these gems as they come around for a second and third time. Gosh, Sy this is really good!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour - The winds of sure direction blew this one in on me. I like it very much. I love the way the wind blows the landscape about. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
In awe  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
A wonderful piece Sy |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Incredible Sy! Nice work. |
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Willem Member
since 1999-11-18
Posts 139Inverness, FL, USA |
What a treat for the imagination as well as for the ear! Poetry at its best, even if one doesn't entirely agree with some elements of the message. I wish I had your talent, Seymour... Willem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhtDove, Thank you for the absolutely. *L* Denise, Wonderful, makes my day. *L* PoetdeVine, Always nice to hear from you, thanks for the read and nice comment. Marge, Love your comments. *L* Hoot, Thank you for the awe, That rhymes with more. *L* Dr Moose1, I always enjoy a nice piece too. Thank you. |
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