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It is odd to me

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 12-02-1999 09:44 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

It is odd to me

Seeds of change within persist
As winds of nature dance atwist.
Play in space and dance in grace,
Ever, through all times embrace.

Without arms it does the deed,
Stops and drops the carried seed.
Within a paradox of blend,
Where sinks the roots until its end.

The wind, the artist without a thought,
Paints the canvas green with thwart.
Beyond imaginations ken,
Where lies the primal Eden den.

The garden of the apple seed
The garden of our Adams deed
The garden where the wind has blown,
The garden that the wind has sown.

And here is where we seek confession,
Amongst the winds indiscretion?
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 12-02-1999 09:58 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Hummm,I don't know quite where to start
This poem requires a little discussion
A give and take which we can't make
Since dialogue is out of the question
So maybe it's a better call
Not to even start at all
I'll simply say, and make your day
That this is a wonderful verse all the way
It is so true, it is so you
Verbal whiz of every hue
So eloquent, so lyric bent
You have been my heart's content
Liz
Nan
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2 posted 12-02-1999 09:59 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I absolutely love picturing the wind as an artist.....Neato!!
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 12-02-1999 10:28 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

WOW...you simply amaze me
Balladeer
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4 posted 12-02-1999 11:11 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

....and the hits keep right on rolling, Sy.
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 12-03-1999 08:34 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Liz,
Just got up and don't feel clever,
But your in my heart forever.
Nan,
The wind up there does alot of painting.
Hoot,
You are my WOW girl. *L*
Balladeer,
Glad you liked it I was not sure.
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6 posted 12-03-1999 09:53 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Nature in its purest form....bless you.
Severn
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7 posted 12-11-1999 08:40 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I seem to have missed this! How shocking...

This is...unusual - in a really great way.
The wind can only be indiscreet if there are voices to float upon it.

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 12-11-1999 08:50 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunshine,
Bless you and thank you. *L*
Severn,
There are always voices on the wind. *L*
WhtDove
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9 posted 12-11-1999 09:13 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Sey, now wait a minute here! You know I just thought this was well, absolutely wonderful!

 <*\\\><
Jesus is the reason for the season

Denise
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10 posted 12-11-1999 09:45 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

How did I miss this one? Wonderful, as usual, Seymour!

 Denise


Poet deVine
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11 posted 12-11-1999 09:54 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I'm glad we can find these gems as they come around for a second and third time. Gosh, Sy this is really good!  
Marge Tindal
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12 posted 12-12-1999 12:15 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour -

The winds of sure direction
blew this one in on me.
I like it very much.
I love the way the wind
blows the landscape about.




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hoot_owl_rn
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In awe  
Dr.Moose1
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A wonderful piece Sy
lostboy
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15 posted 12-12-1999 12:56 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Incredible Sy! Nice work.
Willem
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16 posted 12-12-1999 01:21 PM       View Profile for Willem   Email Willem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Willem

What a treat for the imagination as well
as for the ear!  Poetry at its best, even
if one doesn't entirely agree with some
elements of the message. I wish I had your
talent, Seymour...

Willem
Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 12-12-1999 03:08 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

WhtDove,
Thank you for the absolutely. *L*
Denise,
Wonderful, makes my day. *L*
PoetdeVine,
Always nice to hear from you, thanks for the read and nice comment.
Marge,
Love your comments. *L*
Hoot,
Thank you for the awe, That rhymes with more. *L*
Dr Moose1,
I always enjoy a nice piece too. Thank you.
 
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