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brandondinsmore
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 142
OKC, OK

0 posted 1999-12-02 04:12 PM


i have a thingy
for curves on a girl
and for smiles in a girl
and for love in her self
i haven't muscles to
deal with it all
only my mind
can protest to it all
she is a happiness
a blinding desire
i want her so bad
my poem turns liar...

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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-12-02 11:55 PM


I really liked this one! hehe Very cute little ditty!! If it makes you feel any better, I have a thingy for the flat of a man's tight stomach! I've even had dreams about a man's stomach, (whom I didn't even know!) and wow - was it a good dream! hehe This made me think of that!! THANKS!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale


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