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Open Poetry #4

Canned Pie

brandondinsmore
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 142
OKC, OK

0 posted 1999-12-02 04:10 PM

this thing i have
loose conjunction with time
is a wasting away
hault of a crime
and i fear for your safety
when these words pillage forth
an atrosity of lingualism
a thing for my single-ism(?)
this dearest of problems
for my heart-loving heart
an inability to CREate
an ability for false-art
the cure is in her love
in my love for her love
like the soothing of clove-oil
on word-soiled mouth

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A true novice of a man when it comes to being a man at something...

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

1 posted 1999-12-02 11:52 PM

I'm not sure I'm getting the whole meaning of this one...would you want to explain it a bit...? I think I understand some of the emotions in it, but I'm not sure.....Sorry...although, I do like it! Very interesting title too!!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

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