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Canned Pie

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brandondinsmore
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since 10-27-1999
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0 posted 12-02-1999 04:10 PM       View Profile for brandondinsmore   Email brandondinsmore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for brandondinsmore

this thing i have
loose conjunction with time
is a wasting away
hault of a crime
and i fear for your safety
when these words pillage forth
an atrosity of lingualism
a thing for my single-ism(?)
this dearest of problems
for my heart-loving heart
an inability to CREate
an ability for false-art
the cure is in her love
in my love for her love
like the soothing of clove-oil
on word-soiled mouth

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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 12-02-1999 11:52 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I'm not sure I'm getting the whole meaning of this one...would you want to explain it a bit...? I think I understand some of the emotions in it, but I'm not sure.....Sorry...although, I do like it! Very interesting title too!!

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