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brandondinsmore
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0 posted 12-02-1999 03:59 PM       View Profile for brandondinsmore   Email brandondinsmore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for brandondinsmore

seasons...hot
skies...serine
cosmic anecdotal clouds
sweeping the hemisphere,
waves of the purist light
shining for us tonight
and I wonder why you love him
Do I love you?
or
Do I hate him?
... ...
in all of life's
sequentiality of factors
given to me...the child
a universe...
of great importance
has emerged as my world
has emerged as this world
it is mine...

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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 12-02-1999 11:50 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

This sounds like you rejoice for life, and I'm not sure what else I read into it...you used some really nice imagery though, good descriptive words!

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