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brandondinsmore
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 142
OKC, OK

0 posted 1999-12-02 03:59 PM


seasons...hot
skies...serine
cosmic anecdotal clouds
sweeping the hemisphere,
waves of the purist light
shining for us tonight
and I wonder why you love him
Do I love you?
or
Do I hate him?
... ...
in all of life's
sequentiality of factors
given to me...the child
a universe...
of great importance
has emerged as my world
has emerged as this world
it is mine...


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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-12-02 11:50 PM


This sounds like you rejoice for life, and I'm not sure what else I read into it...you used some really nice imagery though, good descriptive words!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale


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