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5 December, 1999
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5 December, 1999 |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
A girl I know Lives on her own Her years don't show Nor pain she's known Independant So strong and proud Spirit-sent Above the crowd Her art is a blessing Her love so strong Her pain I am guessing Folded in for so long With rapturous joy I'll sing her praise With one word from her My heartsong raised Knows not her worth She stirs my soul If she were my earth I'd be her blind mole She frees my mind And soothes my heart With words so kind She's my other part DON'T EVER GO FOR I WOULD DIE I'D MISS YOU SO YOU ARE MY SKY Peace to you, Jennifer. May you be blessed on this special day, that has been filled with both tears and joy. David |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
This is very beautiful, and sincere. I don't know the story behind it, but I have a feeling it's a good one...one that probably brings tears....I'm sure this means alot to her....whoever the lucky girl is! Thanks for sharing such an intimate piece. ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Yes, thanks for sharing this - special indeed and written most beautifully. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Thank-you David, this is the best, most sincere present anyone has ever given me. You are truly an honest and upfront friend. My birthday will be special with thoughts of your gift.  Thank-You, Jennifer Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This was truly sweet!! Bridgette ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart." |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Really nice DB. Pure, honest sentiment. Happy B-day Jen. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Thank you to all who bothered to click me. Jen, I could never say enough. David |
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