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5 December, 1999

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Deep Blue Me
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0 posted 12-02-1999 02:21 PM       View Profile for Deep Blue Me   Email Deep Blue Me   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Deep Blue Me

A girl I know
Lives on her own
Her years don't show
Nor pain she's known

Independant
So strong and proud
Spirit-sent
Above the crowd

Her art is a blessing
Her love so strong
Her pain I am guessing
Folded in for so long

With rapturous joy
I'll sing her praise
With one word from her
My heartsong raised

Knows not her worth
She stirs my soul
If she were my earth
I'd be her blind mole

She frees my mind
And soothes my heart
With words so kind
She's my other part

DON'T EVER GO
FOR I WOULD DIE
I'D MISS YOU SO
YOU ARE MY SKY


Peace to you, Jennifer.
May you be blessed on this special day, that has been filled with both tears and joy.

David
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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 12-02-1999 11:48 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

This is very beautiful, and sincere. I don't know the story behind it, but I have a feeling it's a good one...one that probably brings tears....I'm sure this means alot to her....whoever the lucky girl is!
Thanks for sharing such an intimate piece.

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Severn
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2 posted 12-03-1999 03:13 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Yes, thanks for sharing this - special indeed and written most beautifully.
JennyLee
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3 posted 12-03-1999 11:43 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Thank-you David, this is the best, most sincere present anyone has ever given me. You are truly an honest and upfront friend.
My birthday will be special with thoughts of your gift.


Thank-You,
Jennifer Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


Justbleu
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4 posted 12-03-1999 11:48 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This was truly sweet!!

Bridgette

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."
lostboy
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5 posted 12-03-1999 11:53 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Really nice DB. Pure, honest sentiment.
Happy B-day Jen.
Deep Blue Me
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6 posted 12-03-1999 06:05 PM       View Profile for Deep Blue Me   Email Deep Blue Me   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deep Blue Me

Thank you to all who bothered to click me.
Jen, I could never say enough.

David
 
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