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Maday in a Pill

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armanca
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0 posted 12-02-1999 01:40 PM       View Profile for armanca   Email armanca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for armanca

Swirling nonsense in my brain
becaomes a foggy notion of a better day
Rain comes...
and the better day becomes a headache
eased by a little pill
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brandondinsmore
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1 posted 12-02-1999 04:05 PM       View Profile for brandondinsmore   Email brandondinsmore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brandondinsmore

Short, sweet, great title. I like this one. Can you delve into detail of the subject?
armanca
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2 posted 12-02-1999 05:27 PM       View Profile for armanca   Email armanca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for armanca

I feel like I have been told so much and haven't listened to what was said. About life, love, and relationships. So, my life becomes this outward object that i'm trying to decipher...but in the end. I can't grasp any meanings...and i end up with a headache.
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3 posted 12-02-1999 05:31 PM       View Profile for jennyanydots   Email jennyanydots   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for jennyanydots

I agree with brandon. Great Title!!! Very introspective.
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4 posted 12-02-1999 10:16 PM       View Profile for armanca   Email armanca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for armanca

Thank you Jenny!! Neat name...where'd you come up with it?

Carman
 
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