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armanca
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0 posted 12-02-1999 12:57 PM       View Profile for armanca   Email armanca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for armanca

Like licorice rain
... a mind game
Torrid thoughts abused
... candyland approves
Melt in your hand...
but i'm in your head
And holding me down
only causes your sanity to sink
... in my sweet syrup.


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1 posted 12-02-1999 05:42 PM       View Profile for jennyanydots   Email jennyanydots   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for jennyanydots

WOW!!! This one is a bit challenging (scary)
armanca
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2 posted 12-02-1999 10:21 PM       View Profile for armanca   Email armanca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for armanca

Yes...It is scary. The subject matter that is. It's about an abuser
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3 posted 12-03-1999 09:45 PM       View Profile for jennyanydots   Email jennyanydots   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for jennyanydots

I didn't see it as being from a victim..or did you mean it was written from an abuser?
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I didn't see the abuser part of this either. It's an interesting poem though.
 
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