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Sven
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0 posted 1999-12-02 10:57 AM


Sleep bright angel
Sleep the sleep of dreams
Let the cares of the day slip away
And notice that nothing is as it seems

Close your eyes and rest your head
On the pillow soft and warm
Let your body relax and rest
And you will be safe from harm

Dream of me bright angel
Dream only of me
For I will be with you in your dreams
And I will make them reality. . .



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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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1 posted 1999-12-02 11:07 AM


Very beautiful Sven!
Nan
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2 posted 1999-12-02 04:13 PM


Sweet Dreams, Sven...
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3 posted 1999-12-02 04:23 PM


Simple and lovely!
Liz

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4 posted 1999-12-02 04:24 PM


how nocturnally beautiful. i love it, sven.
what caused you to write this? i love your words. i myself feel comfortable saying the same thing to a dear person of mine. let us hear (read) more.

Sven
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5 posted 1999-12-02 05:28 PM


Thank you all. . .

This poem is written to a very special person in my life. . . who is apart from me. . . but there isn't a day that goes by that I don't think of them . . .

I am their angel. . . and they, they are my charge. . . to care for and to keep. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
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6 posted 1999-12-02 05:34 PM


Such a lullaby to have sung to one. Well done, Sven.
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7 posted 1999-12-02 05:51 PM


Very pretty.
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8 posted 1999-12-04 11:06 PM


Wonderful!

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9 posted 1999-12-04 11:33 PM


Sven - This imparts a tender, caring angel keeping the guardian watch.
So very nice.


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