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Days Like This

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Sven
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0 posted 12-02-1999 10:51 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

I really hate days like this. . .
Days without you. . .
Days spent dreaming of your kiss. . .
Days of feeling blue. . .
being with you my only wish

You're so close and yet so far. . .
On days like this. . .
Do we see the same morning star. . .
Do we have the same wish. . .
being with you where you are

We each go through our day. . .
On days like this. . .
But the one thing that I want to say. . .
Being with you would be bliss. . .
if with your heart mine could stay.

The thing I hate most about days like this. .
Days without you. . .
Is that days like this, dreaming of your kiss

change into night. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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1 posted 12-02-1999 03:00 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oh Yeah, I can really relate - and I loved the last part about days turning to nights....that's even worse sometimes! This was very moving, and a very beautiful heartfelt poem! Glad I caught it to kick it back to the top for others to enjoy & relate to!

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2 posted 12-02-1999 05:25 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you so much. . .

I'm glad that you liked it. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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3 posted 12-02-1999 05:50 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Yeah, they do turn into night. Lovely.
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