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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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No Clue Up above the sun Down below the dirt Inside the fishes mouth Upside down Where is it?? I don't know Behind the star Under the feet of that old man Within the heart of the television set It is not there I do not see it Blustering by as it rakes past the trees I sense something unreal to me Through the screech of the fire engine I hear it Deep within the flavor of the frozen cone I feel it In the traces of our mere words I see it ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart." |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
This is very interesting although I'm not sure what it is we're looking for! I guess that makes the title very befitting! I loved the line, " In the fish's mouth"....very original!! You used some rather interesting phrases while "searching".....  Thank you for sharing this - - I liked !!------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I know what I'm searching for!! What are you searching for?? You may search for anything you want to!! That is the way it was meant to be!!! Thanks FemmeFatale!!! Bridgette |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
I like this cuz different things go through my mind of what you're searching for or if it were me, what I'd be searching for. You got my wheels turning here bleu!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What he's looking for is "IT" "IT"'s very plain to see And "IT" is everywhere Everywhere "IT" wants to be This poem makes my heart just throb For I know that "IT" is THE BLOB Liz |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Lostboy I'm happy to hear that your wheels are turning!! Liz, LOL!! That is too funny!!! Thanks for making me smile!! Bridgette [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 12-03-1999).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Interesting poem...I do see the search here! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Clever clever Bleu! hehe - I like this!!!  's my friend. |
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