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Justbleu
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0 posted 12-02-1999 10:27 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

No Clue

Up above the sun

Down below the dirt

Inside the fishes mouth

Upside down

Where is it??

I don't know

Behind the star

Under the feet of that old man

Within the heart of the television set

It is not there

I do not see it

Blustering by as it rakes past the trees

I sense something unreal to me

Through the screech of the fire engine I hear it

Deep within the flavor of the frozen cone I feel it

In the traces of our mere words I see it



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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."
© Copyright 1999 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 12-02-1999 02:51 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

This is very interesting although I'm not sure what it is we're looking for! I guess that makes the title very befitting! I loved the line, " In the fish's mouth"....very original!! You used some rather interesting phrases while "searching"..... Thank you for sharing this - - I liked !!

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Justbleu
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2 posted 12-03-1999 11:44 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I know what I'm searching for!! What are you searching for?? You may search for anything you want to!! That is the way it was meant to be!!!

Thanks FemmeFatale!!!

Bridgette
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3 posted 12-03-1999 11:49 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

I like this cuz different things go through my mind of what you're searching for or if it were me, what I'd be searching for. You got my wheels turning here bleu!!
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 12-03-1999 12:33 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

What he's looking for is "IT"
"IT"'s very plain to see
And "IT" is everywhere
Everywhere "IT" wants to be
This poem makes my heart just throb
For I know that "IT" is THE BLOB
Liz
Justbleu
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5 posted 12-03-1999 11:28 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Lostboy I'm happy to hear that your wheels are turning!!
Liz, LOL!! That is too funny!!!
Thanks for making me smile!!

Bridgette

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6 posted 12-04-1999 05:35 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Interesting poem...I do see the search here!
Severn
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7 posted 12-08-1999 06:48 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Clever clever Bleu!

hehe - I like this!!!

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