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Declaration of Love

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jcthaman
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0 posted 12-01-1999 09:13 PM       View Profile for jcthaman   Email jcthaman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jcthaman

I look at you and your beauty leaves me breathless,
I pray to God to make our friendship deathless.
then it occurs to me that what we have is more than friendship,
when i see myself in dreams kissing your lips.

you are beautiful, intelligent, and kind,
when i'm with you i lose track of the time,
your touch overloads my mind,
another like you i'll probably never find,

But when i'm with you, i don't know what to say,
and my shyness i regret all day,
you seem perfect for me in every single way.

i've never felt the way i do with you,
and i wonder if you feel the same way too.
although fear of rejection makes this hard to do,
i've written this poem to say that "i love you."

Jeremy Carey

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1 posted 12-01-1999 09:32 PM       View Profile for Jewl_24_1999   Email Jewl_24_1999   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Jewl_24_1999

I bet your pretty great yourself. and so is this poem!
jcthaman
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2 posted 12-02-1999 03:18 PM       View Profile for jcthaman   Email jcthaman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jcthaman

hehe, thanx. i am just beginning to write poetry and i wrote this for someone, but haven't given her it yet.
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3 posted 12-02-1999 07:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely sentiments, Jeremy! Give it to her! She'll love it!

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4 posted 12-02-1999 07:41 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Great thoughts, Jeremy.
Now share them with her.


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