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Kevin
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0 posted 1999-12-01 08:42 PM


For anyone who has ever seen love sweep in and out of their life too quickly

Entrance
stage right
Smiles
Bright light
quick glance
soft touch
Love sweet
too much
subtle
lonely
Love you
only
watch close
say less
feeble
at best
much hope
tonight
exit
stage right


© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
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1 posted 1999-12-01 08:59 PM


Ahh yes...it is familiar to me. Great job with this one Kevin!
Denise
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2 posted 1999-12-01 09:05 PM


I think we've all performed on this stage! Very good, Kevin!

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Denise


Ohme
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3 posted 1999-12-01 09:11 PM


I think I saw that play as well. nicely done, Kevin.
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 1999-12-01 10:55 PM


Hey, I even went for a repeat preformance Well written Kevin
Kevin
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5 posted 1999-12-01 11:10 PM


lol im starting to think you guys are replying to see who can out metaphor the next!

everyone is so cool though i love the fit

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