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Beri
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 149


0 posted 1999-12-01 08:25 PM


Why, when I finally think
I am over you,
My world comes crashing down on me
Again...?
I believe that I have moved on,
Until I see you once more,
My heart swells up
And my world comes crashing down on me
Again...
"Wow," I say, "I'm finally free
of his grasp on my heart..."
Then same as before,
I experience you in some way,
Or another,
And my world comes crashing down on me
Again...

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Jewl_24_1999
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since 1999-10-24
Posts 64
USA
1 posted 1999-12-01 09:12 PM


ah, yes! if love were only easy. I have felt this before too. I guess time is the best medicine, or so I hear. lovely poem.
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-01 09:53 PM


Very sad. Great title for a great poem! I've been there, I'm sure most people have.

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Denise


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