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vandana
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0 posted 1999-12-01 07:59 PM


Standing outside in the rain,
The stars are on the sky,
Wonder how many stars are the tonight,
Wonder If It's true that you're gone,
And never come back in my life again,
Is It's true what the world say that I'm crazy and waiting for you to come back,
Let the days shine,
When the stars are so bright,
Standing outside in the rain,
Looking back those years and days,
Were so pericous
And you're and alive to see your smile,
Laughing and holding hands ,
Those memories are just right
If Am I crazy for you,
And still the the time for your return,
Still am I a fool to think that you're alive,
And am I crazy for your love,
Waiting for your return

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Jewl_24_1999
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since 1999-10-24
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1 posted 1999-12-01 09:27 PM


OH! this was so touching, very beautiful.
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