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Impotent Boys

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RobertB
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0 posted 12-01-1999 07:36 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB

Impotent Boys


Nonresistant to
women weaving dreams
into webs with words
from smooth tongues slapping
on soft palates
enticing lures to little fishes
swimming in this
pond-ering of thoughts
with meanings obscured
through murky waters.


Robert

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
© Copyright 1999 RobertB - All Rights Reserved
Ohme
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1 posted 12-01-1999 07:53 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Most interesting. I like it.
Nan
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Paints a scarlet picture of women, it does...
Beri
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3 posted 12-01-1999 08:27 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Don't quite know what I want to say about this, except that it struck me, and I like it! Great job. :-)
RobertB
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4 posted 12-01-1999 09:18 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

I wrote this poem today at lunch in response to a poem posted in another forum by a woman. I was enthralled by the poem... captivated by it. All night I dreamt of it....I felt wrapped in its words somehow.

No disrespect to any woman here Nan. More like a tribute I think.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Denise
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here fishy fishy fishy.... (Say didn't you say that once, yes you did, I remember!)

Very good poem, Robert! One of your best!

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Denise

RobertB
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6 posted 12-01-1999 09:28 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

Ok Denise....$10.00 this week!!! Thank you very much.

RB

PS: I did say here fishy fishy to Munda. By the way....where is Munda???

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Martie
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I really liked this Robert, kind of allusive, but captivating. I tried to capture the meaning but it slithered from my grasp into the murky waters.
RobertB
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8 posted 12-01-1999 09:31 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

like a slippery fish??? Eh Martie??
Nan
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Huh? What Robert? Red is one of my favorite colors - I look pretty good in it myself...LOL...
Marilyn
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Very well done Robert. Loved this one.
RobertB
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Oh.....I had a flashback of the Scarlet letter

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Lynn
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Iliked this one a lot Robert.

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~
Seymour Tabin
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RobertB,
Good one.
Elizabeth Santos
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Robert,
I like it!
Liz
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Most interesting
RobertB
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16 posted 12-02-1999 07:46 AM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

Thanks to all of you!! This is one of my 5 minute poems that I wonder where in the heck it came from!! Just eating lunch yesterday and there it was.

Robert
Toerag
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17 posted 12-02-1999 07:59 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

I thought this was gonna be yet another poem about Balladeer?....Though it wasn't, it was still quite good...
RobertB
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18 posted 12-02-1999 04:16 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

hmmmm should I write one about him???? :-}
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