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FALLEN ANGEL
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since 12-01-1999
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BROWNSVILLE, TX, USA


0 posted 12-01-1999 06:28 PM       View Profile for FALLEN ANGEL   Email FALLEN ANGEL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FALLEN ANGEL

I CAN'T EAT,
I CAN'T SLEEP,
I CAN'T SEE STRAIGHT,
OR EVEN CONCENTRATE.
I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO FEEL,
THIS WOUND I DON'T KNOW IF IT WILL HEAL.
MY HEART I KNOW NOT IF THIS LOAD IT CCAN HEAVE,
IT'S GETTING HARD TO BREATH.
MY MIND IS A BLUR,
ALL WORDS ARE A SLUR.
ALL OF THIS BECAUSE I AM MISSING YOU.
WHY YOU LEFT I STILL DON'T QUITE UNDERSTAND,
MY EMOTIONS ARE STRECHED LIKE RUBBERBANDS.
TIME TO YOURSELF YOU SAY,
BUT THE WITH OTHERS I SEE YOU PLAY.
I FEAR NOT TIME YOU NEED,
BUT THAT YOU ARE FEED UP WITH ME!
I SAY THIS BECAUSE AS YOU PASS YOU YOU DON'T SAY "HI",
AND JUST LEAVE ME ON THE SIDE.
YOU ACT AS IF THERE WAS NOTHING WE EVER HAD,
AND THIS IS WHY I AM MISSING YOU.
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poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
Posts 2961
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1 posted 12-01-1999 07:16 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I can really feel your pain in this...your emotion is very strong, and I applaude you for using your writing abilities to vent, and express your frustration....so much better than kicking your cat....
ex-terminator
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2 posted 12-01-1999 10:56 PM       View Profile for ex-terminator   Email ex-terminator   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ex-terminator

OUCH sounds painful I've been there, done that. hope you feel better soon
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