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FALLEN ANGEL
Junior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 19
BROWNSVILLE, TX, USA

0 posted 1999-12-01 06:28 PM


I CAN'T EAT,
I CAN'T SLEEP,
I CAN'T SEE STRAIGHT,
OR EVEN CONCENTRATE.
I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO FEEL,
THIS WOUND I DON'T KNOW IF IT WILL HEAL.
MY HEART I KNOW NOT IF THIS LOAD IT CCAN HEAVE,
IT'S GETTING HARD TO BREATH.
MY MIND IS A BLUR,
ALL WORDS ARE A SLUR.
ALL OF THIS BECAUSE I AM MISSING YOU.
WHY YOU LEFT I STILL DON'T QUITE UNDERSTAND,
MY EMOTIONS ARE STRECHED LIKE RUBBERBANDS.
TIME TO YOURSELF YOU SAY,
BUT THE WITH OTHERS I SEE YOU PLAY.
I FEAR NOT TIME YOU NEED,
BUT THAT YOU ARE FEED UP WITH ME!
I SAY THIS BECAUSE AS YOU PASS YOU YOU DON'T SAY "HI",
AND JUST LEAVE ME ON THE SIDE.
YOU ACT AS IF THERE WAS NOTHING WE EVER HAD,
AND THIS IS WHY I AM MISSING YOU.

© Copyright 1999 FALLEN ANGEL - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-12-01 07:16 PM


I can really feel your pain in this...your emotion is very strong, and I applaude you for using your writing abilities to vent, and express your frustration....so much better than kicking your cat....
ex-terminator
New Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 7
usa
2 posted 1999-12-01 10:56 PM


OUCH sounds painful I've been there, done that. hope you feel better soon
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