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vandana
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0 posted 1999-12-01 04:59 PM


I lay on my bed every night,
I switch off the lights,
I ried to close my eye,
But I can't,you come to my mind,
I see your smiling face ,
You smiled,
I wonder why this love has to end
And am I wrong to love you,
Am I hurt you,
Those words keeps coming to my mind
But I still remember you,
As a goood friend,
Always remember you,
Even though you'll not forgive me,
I'll always remember you,

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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 1999-12-01 07:26 PM


One of my favorite songs is titled, "I will remember you".....this reminded me of it. Very nice expression of love and regret....Thanks for sharing.

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale


poetFemmeFatale
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2 posted 1999-12-01 07:28 PM


You should hear this song...."I will remember you" by Sarah McLachlan.....I think you'll like it.
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