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Open Poetry #4

This is strange

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 1999-12-01 01:36 PM

Echoes in my thoughts
Truth from deep within
Whispers in my dreams
Vibes shouting throughout
Intuition knows
One and One makes One
Heart struck
Flashback
Deep impression on my soul
Up and down the spine
There I see
All of everything
That matters in life
Right in front of me

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."

[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 12-02-1999).]

Jewl_24_1999
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since 1999-10-24

Posts 64
USA

1 posted 1999-12-01 03:18 PM

very good poem!

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

2 posted 1999-12-01 05:15 PM

Just bleu
I like it! Very lovely!
Elizabeth

Seaangel
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since 1999-07-27

Posts 167
Auckland, New Zealand

3 posted 1999-12-01 05:54 PM

wonderful poem!!!!

really all that matters to me is right in front of me as i sit here reading your poem justbleu! poetry and the eternal nature of language.
these monumental moments, whether about a person or a career, or whatever...they make life worth every bit of misery.

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 1999-12-02 03:37 AM

Thanks...I'm glad you all like this!! This poem seemed strange as I was writing it!!

Yes, whatever, can make it all worth the misery!!

So true!!

Bridgette

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Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

5 posted 1999-12-02 07:11 AM

If a poem seems strange when you write it I think it means it's one of those poems that are already written - and we become the vessel. Strange or no it is beautiful. And it's great to see your work again bleu! Missed ya!

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

6 posted 1999-12-03 11:47 AM

Thanks Severn....I always miss this place when I'm away tooo long!!

Bridgette

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