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Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11
Posts 222
Georgia United States

0 posted 1999-12-01 12:07 PM


I wrote this for my precious friends. With two jobs our time together is little. For this I am sorry.

Always on my mind

Maybe a tiny tinkling bell,
will remind me of your laugh.
A soft breeze whispers your name to me.

Even though you may not see me,
I am there with thee.

You are there as at my desk I set,
and as I drive along the road.
Just the thought of you lifts my heavy load.

Time is a precious fleeting thing.
Time can't be brought back to you and me.
Time I have let slip away from me.

So if I fail you,
and I will.
Just remember I love you still.

© Copyright 1999 Betty Gravitt - All Rights Reserved
Rachel_A
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since 1999-11-30
Posts 70
North Webster, IN USA
1 posted 1999-12-01 12:11 PM


very sweet
Jewl_24_1999
Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 64
USA
2 posted 1999-12-01 11:23 PM


I loved your poem, friends are so priceless
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