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Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

0 posted 1999-11-30 11:01 PM


I thought it was over
A new ultimate low everyday
From your fresh cold shoulder
What else was left to say?
Apologies not taken
Forgiveness not given
Two hearts brutally forsaken
But now its time to awaken

I thought my life had ended
The hand I held had let go…
My heart was left unattended
and here I was all alone…

Rivers of tears flowin’
Oceans of silence roarin’
Lake of Love...frozen
But a brighter path was chosen

Now I think my life is just beginning
I hold my own hand in times of need
My heart has found new meaning
And the scars you left have healed

and when my own hand seems too small
and I’m read to give up and fall
and I can’t seem to stand up tall
I know there will always be someone there to call.
11.29.99




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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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© Copyright 1999 Rakhee - All Rights Reserved
Jewl_24_1999
Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 64
USA
1 posted 1999-11-30 11:04 PM


Very beautiful Star!
Rachel_A
Member
since 1999-11-30
Posts 70
North Webster, IN USA
2 posted 1999-12-01 12:08 PM


Totally awesome. I can so relate!!!
Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
3 posted 1999-12-01 10:01 PM


thank you!!!!!

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-12-01 10:40 PM


Well done
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