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Star Fairy 2
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since 09-06-99
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cerritos, california, usa


0 posted 11-30-1999 11:01 PM       View Profile for Star Fairy 2   Email Star Fairy 2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Star Fairy 2

I thought it was over
A new ultimate low everyday
From your fresh cold shoulder
What else was left to say?
Apologies not taken
Forgiveness not given
Two hearts brutally forsaken
But now its time to awaken

I thought my life had ended
The hand I held had let go…
My heart was left unattended
and here I was all alone…

Rivers of tears flowin’
Oceans of silence roarin’
Lake of Love...frozen
But a brighter path was chosen

Now I think my life is just beginning
I hold my own hand in times of need
My heart has found new meaning
And the scars you left have healed

and when my own hand seems too small
and I’m read to give up and fall
and I can’t seem to stand up tall
I know there will always be someone there to call.
11.29.99




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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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© Copyright 1999 Rakhee - All Rights Reserved
Jewl_24_1999
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since 10-24-1999
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1 posted 11-30-1999 11:04 PM       View Profile for Jewl_24_1999   Email Jewl_24_1999   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Jewl_24_1999

Very beautiful Star!
Rachel_A
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since 11-30-1999
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2 posted 12-01-1999 12:08 AM       View Profile for Rachel_A   Email Rachel_A   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rachel_A

Totally awesome. I can so relate!!!
Star Fairy 2
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3 posted 12-01-1999 10:01 PM       View Profile for Star Fairy 2   Email Star Fairy 2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Star Fairy 2

thank you!!!!!

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 12-01-1999 10:40 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Well done
 
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