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Marge Tindal
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Shhhh !
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

You stopped me mid-sentence
with a softly whispered, "Shhhh."
Then you rocked me to the bone.
You said that you had to tell me
before I figured it out on my own.

You wanted to say you loved me
and had for such a long time.
It was time for me to listen
to what your heart was saying to mine.

I looked at you in astonishment,
so sure that you must have known,
the thoughts you were now voicing ...
had been my very own.

We had been so busy being friends,
we didn't stop to see ...
we had fallen in love ...
me with you
you with me.

And here it is,
looking us both in the eye,
a love so purely simple,
it causes us to sigh.

When friendship goes full-circle
and to this point it comes ...
we can only thank our lucky stars
our love has now begun.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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Saving the best for last, sounds wonderful, and wonderfully put as always
Elizabeth
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You rocked me to the bone with this Marge. Beautiful!
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 11-30-1999 09:14 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Elizabeth - You are so wonderful.

Martie - Your comments mean so much to me.
I'm so glad you read it and liked it.

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Very beautiful, Marge! I love it! I think this is the kind of love that lasts forever!

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Denise

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True friendship knows its own intrinsic bound
The pinnacle a covenant unfound....


A friendship that's true will find that pinnacle - nice job, Marge...
Marge Tindal
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Denise - Forever is a very long time ... and aren't we glad it is so. Thank you for liking it, my friend.

Nan - Never at a loss for words ... you are really nice to have around. Thank you for liking this.

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Just a hunch but I think there's a romantic hiding in you somewhere, Marge. Another excellent work.
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