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trying to keep you in love

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amber
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0 posted 11-30-1999 05:23 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

i hate myself becuase i cannot look past,
the guilty look on your face,
to convince myself that your not hurting me anymore,
and with me youve found your place.

i hate myself becuase i will not,
give all that i have, in fear,
that youll take it with you,
if things dont end up working here.

i hate myself becuase i should not,
take for granted all the hard times,
i know they will aid in the strength,
of your heart and mine.

i hate myself becuse im not able to,
see myself without you anymore,
when i promised i would never admit,
that your the only thing i live for.

i hate myself becuase i cant explian,
just where this feeling is coming from,
im a stubborn coward of a fool,
thats trying to hard to keep you in love.
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 11-30-1999 05:30 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Amber: It can't be done though sweetheart, wish it could...you ok?

HUGS

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2 posted 11-30-1999 06:12 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Don't even think about hating yourself. We've been there and we didn't know where the feeling was coming from, either, but know this......it is a strength, not a weakness.
Ohme
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3 posted 11-30-1999 09:08 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Amber. Never hate yourself for anything. It's ok to have regrets, wish that it wasn't that way. But no, never hate yourself.
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 11-30-1999 09:11 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Amber,
I love the title of this poem! It's wonderful! So is the poem
Elizabeth
amber
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5 posted 12-08-1999 02:10 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

im sorry it took me so long to respond, but i got busy, i want to thank you all so much, through your words since i have been here, i have felt more warmth and caring then any place ive ever been thank you all for treating me as kindly as you do. i appreciate from deep inside my soul.
amber
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6 posted 12-08-1999 02:11 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

im sorry it took me so long to respond, but i got busy, i want to thank you all so much, through your words since i have been here, i have felt more warmth and caring then any place ive ever been thank you all for treating me as kindly as you do. i appreciate from deep inside my soul.
hoot_owl_rn
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My heart goes out to you dear...big hugs
Pepper
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8 posted 12-08-1999 10:45 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I agree with Ohme Amber....never hate yourself for any reason!!
A very heartfelt piece....
   Hugs

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