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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-11-30 07:53 AM


Don't Blink
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

These eyes are the eyes
of a woman in love.
These eyes know not a
minute of shame.
These eyes follow you
what else can I do?
Until, at last,
you call my name.

These eyes
see your eyes
looking back.
These eyes see you look at me.
These eyes flirt
with the flirt in you.
These eyes sense you
feel the same.

These eyes now hold a vision,
of love reflected in your eyes too.
These eyes see a man
who needs to see
the reflection that I do.

These eyes looking back at you
carry a promise.
Don't blink !

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 1999-11-30 09:10 AM


*sigh*...

HUGS

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There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it...

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 1999-11-30 06:56 PM


RainbowGirl - We should all know our friends well enough to know where their *sighs* come from ... thank you ... I think I know ...
from a heart that thinks very much like mine.
HUGS BACK AT YOU !
~Marge~

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3 posted 1999-11-30 06:58 PM


Terrific words, Marge. Too often we do blink and look at all we miss!
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 1999-11-30 08:06 PM


Marge,
I think it was a computer glitch, because things are back on now. I don't know what's going on!Any way, this poem is beautiful.
Elizabeth

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5 posted 1999-11-30 08:22 PM


Marge, I enjoyed this poem very much.
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 1999-11-30 08:32 PM


Balladeer - I would never want to 'blink'
and miss a poem or a comment from you.
Thank you.

Elizabeth - Whew ! LOL

Martie - Thank you, hon.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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