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Spring Heeled Jim
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since 1999-11-22
Posts 19
Paris, Texas

0 posted 1999-11-30 07:22 AM


My sweet I speak again your name and in my thoughts I hear your pain
My eyes have not so soon forgot
the beauty of your empty reign.

Your circle of the ground I reach,
can not refrain and holds me still
So lost am I in what I preach
my love will hold me at your will.

My Montana, just a thought,
a daydream ever in my mind
Knowledge I have not been taught
perfection I won't seek to find

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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 1999-11-30 06:28 PM


Perhaps it's because I know someone named Montana, but I find myself wondering if you're writing to a person or about the state - Either way, the sentiment is great...
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