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My Montana

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Spring Heeled Jim
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0 posted 11-30-1999 07:22 AM       View Profile for Spring Heeled Jim   Email Spring Heeled Jim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Spring Heeled Jim

My sweet I speak again your name and in my thoughts I hear your pain
My eyes have not so soon forgot
the beauty of your empty reign.

Your circle of the ground I reach,
can not refrain and holds me still
So lost am I in what I preach
my love will hold me at your will.

My Montana, just a thought,
a daydream ever in my mind
Knowledge I have not been taught
perfection I won't seek to find
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Perhaps it's because I know someone named Montana, but I find myself wondering if you're writing to a person or about the state - Either way, the sentiment is great...
 
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