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Eloise
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since 11-27-1999
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0 posted 11-29-1999 10:08 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Eloise

Once again from this writers pen
Flow all the memories back again.
Words that touch the heart and mind
And sometimes places hard to find.

Memories of happy times and also hurt and pain.
Let's not forget the stars and moon and the fresh smell of the rain.
The whispered words of lovers flow
With passion only the heart will know.

Many verses are of the past and future yet to come.
While some thoughts leave me breathless, others make me run.
This pen floats through so many dreams
Locked here inside this time machine.

From pen to paper written on the page
Are some of kindness and some of rage.
The spectrum of life given in time
Are merely thoughts inked into rhyme.
© Copyright 1999 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-29-1999 10:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Eloise! Just excellent! You have a great talent! It is a pleasure to read your words!

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Denise

Ohme
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2 posted 11-29-1999 10:29 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

That's the way I do it. Lovely, the way you do it.
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 11-29-1999 10:33 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Very astutely phrased, Eloise.
Applause is heard throughout the forum !


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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
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since 11-08-1999
Posts 9405
Pennsylvania


4 posted 11-29-1999 11:52 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Eloise
Welcome to the poet's page
It is a place you'll love to be
For other poet's will so inspire
And so enrich your poetry
At least that is what I have found
Inspiration, loving friends
Who never ever let you down
And add excitement to your pen
Loved your poem!
Elizabeth
Eloise
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since 11-27-1999
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5 posted 11-30-1999 12:09 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Denise - thank you once again. I will take this as quite a compliment coming from you. I have read alot of your words.

Ohme - thank you so much.

Marge - I hear the applause and I bow. Thank you.

Elizabeth - Wow, nice welcome. Thank you I know I will enjoy my stay here.
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