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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Once again from this writers pen Flow all the memories back again. Words that touch the heart and mind And sometimes places hard to find. Memories of happy times and also hurt and pain. Let's not forget the stars and moon and the fresh smell of the rain. The whispered words of lovers flow With passion only the heart will know. Many verses are of the past and future yet to come. While some thoughts leave me breathless, others make me run. This pen floats through so many dreams Locked here inside this time machine. From pen to paper written on the page Are some of kindness and some of rage. The spectrum of life given in time Are merely thoughts inked into rhyme. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Eloise! Just excellent! You have a great talent! It is a pleasure to read your words!  ------------------ Denise |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
That's the way I do it. Lovely, the way you do it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Very astutely phrased, Eloise. Applause is heard throughout the forum ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Eloise Welcome to the poet's page It is a place you'll love to be For other poet's will so inspire And so enrich your poetry At least that is what I have found Inspiration, loving friends Who never ever let you down And add excitement to your pen Loved your poem! Elizabeth |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Denise - thank you once again. I will take this as quite a compliment coming from you. I have read alot of your words. Ohme - thank you so much. Marge - I hear the applause and I bow. Thank you. Elizabeth - Wow, nice welcome. Thank you I know I will enjoy my stay here. |
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