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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-11-29 08:49 PM


~Maiden~ Of The Morning
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

A meeting in the glen
amidst the dew of the morning.
I have but a fleeting moment
before you're beside me
without warning.

I seek your eyes
and they shine.
You place your hand
gently in mine.

With slow caresses
you calm my fear.
I am so glad
you found me here.

We have surrendered
to the serenity of this place ...
I watch the sun
light up your face.

In the glen ...
we begin
again.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 1999-11-29 08:54 PM


This had a calming affect.
Ohme
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2 posted 1999-11-29 09:35 PM


Lovely, Marge. I like it.
Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 1999-11-29 09:45 PM


Marge, I love this saga. It's beautiful. and please do check your e-mail again
Elizabeth

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4 posted 1999-11-30 12:31 PM


Yes, I love this too, Marge. Very beautiful!

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Denise


Marge Tindal
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5 posted 1999-11-30 07:18 AM


Other Elizabeth - It is calming to enter the glen of enchantment.

OhMe - Glad you like it.

Elizabeth - And to you who found it lovely, thank you, my friend.

Denise - Beauty is found in the glen of love.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 1999-11-30 07:43 AM


Oh! maiden of a Tuesday morning
Appears on screen without a warning
Silently she slowly creeps
When does she ever, ever sleep?
I wish she'd quite her job and write
Poetry both day and night
Continuing delightful stories
Of lovers in the height of glory
Tales that spark imagination
Of lovers in the Cherokee nation
It's not the glory we behold
It's just the way the story's told
Elizabeth

Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 1999-11-30 07:44 AM


Oh! maiden of a Tuesday morning
Appears on screen without a warning
Silently she slowly creeps
When does she ever, ever sleep?
I wish she'd quite her job and write
Poetry both day and night
Continuing delightful stories
Of lovers in the height of glory
Tales that spark imagination
Of lovers in the Cherokee nation
It's not the glory we behold
It's just the way the story's told
Elizabeth

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
8 posted 1999-11-30 07:44 AM


Oh! maiden of a Tuesday morning
Appears on screen without a warning
Silently she slowly creeps
When does she ever, ever sleep?
I wish she'd quite her job and write
Poetry both day and night
Continuing delightful stories
Of lovers in the height of glory
Tales that spark imagination
Of lovers in the Cherokee nation
It's not the glory we behold
It's just the way the story's told
Elizabeth

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
9 posted 1999-11-30 07:59 AM


How can you delete delete
It has no hands or footed feet
If I sumbit delete, you see
Submit comes flying back at me
I'm certainly no computer whiz
But my delete is on the fizz
My hand mistakenly pushed twice
But then it got submitted thrice
Marge, would you explain to me
How one message turns into three?
Later
Elizabeth

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 1999-11-30 08:09 AM


Elizabeth,
As they said to me
all good things
come in threes.
It is so very nice
to view your messages
thrice !

Must be a gremlin
in the links
with wings,
sending love
in triple blinks.


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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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