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RobertB
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0 posted 1999-11-29 08:24 PM


Just for doing

Only if not
just to be
a wanderer always
never arriving
staying straying
peering into eyes
of another being
detached from reality
showing knowing
in areas unexplored
from depths above
to heights below,
I dream
just for the doing..
some do
just for the dreaming.


Robert


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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

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Jewl_24_1999
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1 posted 1999-11-29 09:28 PM


Loved this, got to have our dreams!
Nan
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2 posted 1999-11-29 09:31 PM


I'd like it as much if it were only the last four lines...
RobertB
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3 posted 1999-11-29 09:54 PM


Thanks Nan.....this time I said tooooo much????!!!!! LOL
Ohme
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4 posted 1999-11-29 10:25 PM


Does it matter why we dream? I think not
Denise
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5 posted 1999-11-29 10:30 PM


Nice dreams!

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Denise


Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 1999-11-29 10:30 PM


Lovely!
Elizabeth

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7 posted 1999-11-29 10:57 PM


Someone talkin bout dreams? Hmmn, ok, let's see if I close my eyes.....and....zzzzzzz

Huh? Oh I was dreamin...hehe great one Robert!

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8 posted 1999-11-29 11:01 PM


RobertB - This is really nice.
I followed the rhyme where it took me ... plesant dreams.

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RobertB
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9 posted 1999-11-30 05:32 PM


love to dream....and daydream too....have to be careful when I am driving though!!!

RB

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