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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 11-29-1999 08:15 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl



or maybe I mean I want me back
that happy rainy sunshine rainbow
the one who smiles and giggles
trusting eyes with sparkling glow

Is there someone else who feels like me
man or woman, teach me, tell me how
give me life walk with me step by step
toss me back my sparkle - now

Make my eyes dance with liquid fire
give my heart back its quiver
sing to me about your dreams
open up - remind me what a heart delivers...


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There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it...
© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-29-1999 08:19 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

The feeling sounds very familiar, RainbowGirl. Sometimes I wonder where we go to when we aren't ourselves, and who it is that takes over for us...

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Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes
Nan
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2 posted 11-29-1999 08:20 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Here's a new one for ya, RG....
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3 posted 11-29-1999 08:22 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I can relate to this...I guess time is what it takes. Hang in there, Rainbow. HUGS

Ah, Nan, that's beautiful!
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Denise



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Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 11-29-1999 08:29 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

This is so well written!
Elizabeth
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5 posted 11-29-1999 08:30 PM       View Profile for cates   Email cates   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cates

I can relate also Rainbow, I know I have traveled that same path and always manage to get back the spark you speak of. Thanks
Ohme
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Borrow these until you find your own!



(((((((((((((((((((((((((((HUGS))))))))))))))))))
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7 posted 11-29-1999 10:17 PM       View Profile for cjs9853   Email cjs9853   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for cjs9853

it will find you when you least expect it:-)smile, god loves you and so do we:-)example- i found you did'nt i.
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RG, I know where your coming from. You may be surprised to find that I'm sure many people feel this way! HUGS to ya! and rainbows too
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9 posted 11-29-1999 10:50 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

A heart delivers a punch!
It stirs another soul.
It finds a glowing ember
one may have thought turned cold.

A heart delivers light
shining from within.
When the light is out,
it gets batteries from a friend.

Here is my battery,
insert it into your light.
It is made to fit,
in your heart this night.

Throw the switch to on,
smile a smile of glee.
Shining from your heart,
is the eternal light I see.

Love to you ~Marge~

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 11-30-1999 07:09 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Elizabeth: Good point...I think some gremlin takes me over..*g*

HUGS

Nan: It's lovely, thank you..

HUGS

Denise: I'm hanging...

HUGS

Elizabeth: Thank you..

HUGS

Cates: Well I think I may ignite when I do...LOL

HUGS

Ohme: Wow!!..Thank you my friend..

HUGS

CJS: Yep, you sure did...bless..

HUGS

WhtDove: Poor souls then..*g*

HUGS

Marge: Hey, I turned it on and it's working again... Thanks for the lend and the poem is great!

HUGS

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There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it...
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