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Release The Dream |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
And it is time for letting go… of dreams held long and dear wishes in the wind Reality sets in and shows its cruel sneer Trust is only found in dust, it is Faith…crushed The hands of the clock paint in gray the long road ahead and what's in store is worse than what came before And the gray is not important when all the colors will go…time ticks by though, and moves away from here Strangled by the waiting and more anticipating but now fingers unbend, release the dreams they know… it is time for letting go © caroline 1999 ------------------ It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain [This message has been edited by caroline (edited 11-29-1999).] [This message has been edited by caroline (edited 11-29-1999).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Hmmmmmm...is this a poem based on numbers..*g* What happened? Ooops, the poem wasn't here when I replied...Did I really drink that much cognac...:-)) and strangely, I still can't see it in this window...*put the glass down Rainbow and stop listening to music and re-adjust your set*...I'll come out and try again..  HUGS *sigh*...Caroline, can read it now, such a shame when dreams have to be let loose but possibly, they weren't worthy of the love you had to give...and I know that doesn't help, nothing does but maybe there is a man out there that will treasure your heart and care for it instead of stamping on it...I hope so! HUGS ------------------ There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 11-29-1999).] [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 11-29-1999).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
It is so hard to let go! I share similar feelings with you tonight Caroline... Sad and beautifully written this piece.. ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
So sad, Caroline. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sigh...you have yet again written your heart so beautifully. Wish there was something I could do to ease your pain. Does knowing I love your poetry help?! Many hugs. K |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
ahh, hmm RG...don't know what happened to it there LOL...thanks for the hugs Thank you Pepper, Elizabeth...you ladies are wonderful Severn, to know one who writes as beautifully as you could love my poetry is a huge boost to my ego! Thank you, my friend ------------------ It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, caroline - You need to post more... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, this is very lovely, Caroline! So touching! ------------------ Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Caroline - that is a lovely thing to say - thankyou. K |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
 but I like it. |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
This is on of your deeper poems and I love it all the more. In fact its your best by far... So say I |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Caroline, I must agree. This is the best writing I've seen from you. I'm sorry for the sadness it took to create it. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Thank you all so much...your kindness is something I truly treasure. ------------------ It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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