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Didn't I Say

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lostboy
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0 posted 11-29-1999 02:23 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lostboy

Started out young and free
Kinda figured it was meant to be
But stories change
Lives re-arrange...I know

Pictures of forgotton times
Memories from the past
Made mistakes and realize
It all went by too fast
Read the paper now and then
A familiar name or two
But what still seems like yesterday
Was the time I had with you

Lightning struck the same place twice
Once with fire, once with ice
Hold a hearing, state my plea
The evidence here will support me

When your river runs dry
And your sky falls down
You can't get off your merry go round
Didn't I say, I'm your man
When the hammer falls
And your luck runs out
Keep in mind without a doubt
Didn't I say, didn't I say.......
© Copyright 1999 lostboy - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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1 posted 11-29-1999 02:27 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Lives certainly do rearrange! *S* Well done!
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2 posted 11-29-1999 02:30 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is very well written, lostboy, and says much.....
Dolphins3
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3 posted 11-29-1999 03:01 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Great job Lostboy. I think we all know how life can change as days go on.
lostboy
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4 posted 11-29-1999 03:49 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

And I guess it will just keep on changin' and re-arrangin'. Thank for the kind words
RainbowGirl
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5 posted 11-29-1999 04:15 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I tried to pick just one single line that I liked the most but I'd have to choose them all..

Smiles here but I guess the favourite one has to be:


"Lightning struck the same place twice
Once with fire, once with ice"


HUGS


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There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it...
A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 11-30-1999 12:20 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

I know the feeling of lives changing, we change and grow, sometimes others don't go in the same direction we are going.
So many times I have reflected over a past love from high school, and I have seen his photo in the hometown paper when I visit there...We were young and free, but he was my first love.
I liked the poem! It spoke to my soul!
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7 posted 11-30-1999 12:22 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Excellent poem, lostboy! I enjoyed this!

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Denise

WhtDove
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8 posted 11-30-1999 12:40 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

WEll done, I enjoyed this!
danni
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9 posted 11-30-1999 01:42 AM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for danni

Exquisite descriptives lostboy. I also enjoyed the fire and ice line. Yes we all do change and rearrange. We always will. The key is to find the one who will go through it with us through good or bad, happy or sad.
That's love my friend.
(at least my idea of love)
Marge Tindal
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10 posted 11-30-1999 07:10 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Didn't I say,
didn't I say ...
I found this lovely
in every way.
~Marge~

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lostboy
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11 posted 12-01-1999 05:43 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Hey all, thanks loads for your responses. Sorry took me so long to reply. Not on line at the moment at home and been sick for a couple of days. Just came in now, after hours, to check in. be back soon, love ya's
Lostboy
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 12-01-1999 05:51 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I love the Lightening to ice line
That's great!
Elizabeth
 
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