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Open Poetry #4

An image of you

seti@home
Junior Member

since 1999-11-28

Posts 24

0 posted 1999-11-29 02:12 PM

An image of you

I wandered for days,
Following your sweet perfume,
Across mountains as tall as the moon,
And valleys as deep as the ocean.
Your sent were your footprints in the air,
Your hair was the clouds in the heavens.
Each night I gazed upon the sky,
And saw a million eyes,
Which ones were yours?
When the moon reflected in a mountain lake,
It was not the moon I saw,
But an image of you.
Each desert dune,
A sea of sand reminded me of you.
Driven by desire,
I crossed a continent,
Before I saw you.
Like a tempestuous torrent,
Of water wanting to burst
Out and touch you for the first time.
If I had a cannon, I would of shot my
Heart upon you.
When we kissed,
A Galaxy was born.

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

1 posted 1999-11-29 02:17 PM

An expansive quest for love's kiss. Beautiful imagery here.

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

2 posted 1999-11-29 03:16 PM

Yes, nice imagery. I could see it. The moon, and the reflection on the lake.

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JOY

-Don't go around saying the world owes you a living; the world owes you nothing; it was here first.
-Mark Twain

seti@home
Junior Member

since 1999-11-28

Posts 24

3 posted 1999-11-29 04:31 PM

I'm inspired to do better

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

4 posted 1999-11-29 07:49 PM

A lovely image of love.

I enjoyed this

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