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seti@home
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0 posted 11-29-1999 02:12 PM       View Profile for seti@home   Email seti@home   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for seti@home

An image of you

I wandered for days,
Following your sweet perfume,
Across mountains as tall as the moon,
And valleys as deep as the ocean.
Your sent were your footprints in the air,
Your hair was the clouds in the heavens.
Each night I gazed upon the sky,
And saw a million eyes,
Which ones were yours?
When the moon reflected in a mountain lake,
It was not the moon I saw,
But an image of you.
Each desert dune,
A sea of sand reminded me of you.
Driven by desire,
I crossed a continent,
Before I saw you.
Like a tempestuous torrent,
Of water wanting to burst
Out and touch you for the first time.
If I had a cannon, I would of shot my
Heart upon you.
When we kissed,
A Galaxy was born.
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RSEvans
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1 posted 11-29-1999 02:17 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

An expansive quest for love's kiss. Beautiful imagery here.
JOY 14
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2 posted 11-29-1999 03:16 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

Yes, nice imagery. I could see it. The moon, and the reflection on the lake.

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seti@home
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I'm inspired to do better
Ohme
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4 posted 11-29-1999 07:49 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

A lovely image of love. I enjoyed this
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