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Isabel

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 11-29-1999 02:03 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Isabel

The dream is there, but truth is too,
I have the presents of one in view.
One physical and one conjured love you see,
That falls in place for only me.
So I love her.

She rules my world of conjugation
A despotic ruler in approbation.
Do, do and do, a thoughtless Queen,
With nothing of remorse to wean.
Yet I love her.

She draws and drains my hearts devotion,
By petty things of little notion.
By lack of eye or lace embrace,
Or pause of breath or touch of face.
Yet I love her.

She picks my cloths, selects my food,
Insists what's good and calls my moods.
A strangers word, seems heaven born,
Mine, is only good for scorn.
Yet I love her.

She kisses me gently on the head,
Acknowledge of the living dead.
When I sleep and start to snore,
She wakes me evermore.
Yet I love her.

She seems to thrive on pure emotion,
Like moving waves upon the ocean.
Name a stance she will not meet,
Or bear a lance she wont unseat.
Yet I love her.

I wish I could define this word,
This word that makes me sound absurd.
I doubt she comprehend this poem,
A head fair made for brush and comb.
Yet I love her.

I will not change the way I feel,
Or turn or parry from her zeal.
I only hope that she will know,
The other me before I go.
So I love her, love her, love her.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 11-29-1999 02:10 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is beautiful Seymour.
RSEvans
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2 posted 11-29-1999 02:13 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Such devotion! I enjoyed the read very much, Sy...
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3 posted 11-29-1999 02:25 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I like this, Seymour... love isn't reserved for the flawless... just for those who can find someone who'll love them in spite of (or because of) their flaws. *S*
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4 posted 11-29-1999 02:28 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

A head made for brush and comb? Oh, she's gonna love that when I explain it to her! Kidding, SY!!!! Knowing both of you, I find this poem to be thoroughly enjoyable. Better and better, SY.
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 11-29-1999 02:57 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
Isabel, the queen of queens
Majestically rules Iberia
With lovely grace she shows her face
On vine of blue wisteria
The mellowness of sturdy vine
The willowy flower so divine
And lovelier yet the taste sublime
Like deepened red exquisite wine
And souls together year to year
Deepens yet the love of flower
That hangs so graceful from the vine
Among the strength of wooded bower
And year to year and age to age
Wisteria's scent fills more the heart
And needs to feel the hand that cares
And will not bear to be apart
There's nothing in the world more grand
Than love that stands the test of time
For that is sure the greatest gift
A love that's true, A love sublime
Love ya,
Elizabeth
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6 posted 11-29-1999 03:22 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

This moved me Sy..very much...
Thank you for sharing this touching display of your love...

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



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lostboy
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7 posted 11-29-1999 03:36 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Enjoyed this very much Sy.
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 11-29-1999 05:51 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Martie,
Thank you so much.
RSEvens,
I enjoyed your comment, thank you.
Suthern,
Your comment is so true. *L*
Balladeer,
You better not, a compliment from you is like winning the oscar. Thanks mike.
Pepper,
What I share are only words
Your friendship and love go far beyond.
Lostboy,
Thank you for the read and comment.
Lizz,
My words to you another time another place
For they are of a finer lace. *L*
Denise
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9 posted 11-29-1999 07:24 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Truly a portrait of the kind of love that lasts! We should all be so blessed! Great poem, Seymour!

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Denise

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 11-29-1999 10:00 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denise,
You are the sweetest of the sweet, *L*
Nan
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11 posted 11-29-1999 11:07 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Isabel is one lucky lady...
 
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